Hannah Fraser

I LOVE IT! I review by telling you how I, the reader, feel about the story. I give it a thousand stars! I want more, more, more! I liked the ...

Very, very, very nice. Are you Stephnie Meyer, you sound a lot like her. Any way, it's clear how I thought it sounded. I never correct spelling or grammar because ...

I enjoyed this story, it's unique! I've never read anything like it! I did find some grammar mistakes, but I think you can correct those on your own. I'm going ...

I really like this piece. Now I'm not going to go into all of the grammar things (because I didn't think I saw any and I'm really bad at it ...

Daphne Nord Preface My mother told me that when she was a little girl she could see the stars out here in the desert. Dad told me that it wasn’t ...

I loved that, but there is somethings that I need to be explained. Is Miss. Lucy and Nate's mother the same person? I didn't think that they were but that's ...

I liked it, but there is a few things that I'd like to let you know. At first I wasn't sure if it was a male main character, but that's ...

I'd correct some of the grammar but it seems as if some one already had done that so it's no use repeating what that person already said. So I'll just ...

A/N: Here you go guys, I hope I made some good changes, I tried my best to not rush it. Also, I don't think chapter one will be ready until ...

Here’s someone screaming about shoes, when it’s me who don’t got feet. Awesome as always, you are truly talented. I really like how you went into this story and a ...

Ha, this was so cute! I feel the same way ALL the time. I see a cute guy, try to act cool, but I'm not cool. :( Anyway, I thought ...

That was kinda awesome! It was so vivid, which makes it so scary. Nice job I liked it, but I did think he'd do more to the girl... Yuk, sorry, ...

I was so elated when you said I could read it. I felt a little bad, making you go through all that trouble, but I see that you enjoyed writing ...

*Sigh* So today is my day off. *Cries* I love school, I can't even get through a three day weekend with out feeling like a worthless bum. But my Indie ...

Oh my gawd that was so funny! I love the ending and by the way, I was laughing all the way through! GOLD STAR! GOLD STAR! GOLD STAR!